Set Projected Images – Junk
Judge: Matt Sillars
(Digital only 2022)
Member No. | Image Title | Judge's Notes | Score | 1st, 2nd, 3rd |
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37 | On the scrap heap | A dynamic shot, central composition works. Edge darkening helps control the eye | 18 | First |
37 | Old but not forgotten | Good use of effect to enhance the etherial qaulity. I like the central shape and the way the trees wrap round | 17 | Second |
29 | The lost shoes | Although a busy shot which needs more control of the eye, the ambiguty of the shoes works well. | 17 | Third |
13 | Unlocked | Nice close up following the rule of 3rds. Good rust but more could be made of the diagonal line of door handle to lead the eye. | 16 | |
29 | A collection of junk | Interesting play on the idea of scale. Clutter works well here although top line is a little light - although controlling eye is important. | 16 | |
51 | Van Graveyard | Good idea here to play with reflections. Dealing more with the top of the image will help control the movement of the eye | 16 | |
62 | The Junkie | Interesting shot - quite challenging. Good highlights and skin tones, but may need to rethink approach to get the background and the person working together. | 16 | |
23 | Barrow tree | Has great potential as it is a complex shot. Perhaps need cropping heavily to enhance the visual elements and work with the the way the colurs blend. | 15 | |
62 | Expensive Junk | Getting in closer may be useful here as less is often more . Perhaps an element of the car and a bit of background would work, Graffiti detail is intersting and could be capitalised on | 15 | |
51 | Spring-time | Good lines in this shot, but right hand edge needs more control - perhaps crop out? I think the left and central elements should be allowed to dominate. | 15 | |
10 | Old boats | Quite pictorial and I think would beneit from getting closer to show the lines of the boats more. Also to stop the occlusion of detail by overlapping boats | 15 | |
16 | Blooming Junk | Perhaps the angle of view coud be reconsidered to enance the line of colour and the line of rust? | 15 | |
23 | Air cleaner | Central compostion - may need to think about controllijg the eye. DOF may need to be more to isloate the key elements further. | 15 | |
2 | Artistic junk | Composition - needs to work with the line and shape to create a more dynamic shape. Also angle of view may be sueful to isolate front elements against the background. | 15 | |
2 | table decoration | Good spillage of material - but how to lead the eye through this complex image is a challenge. Finding the hook and then moving around to shift the elements about in relation to each other may creat a flow. | 15 | |
10 | my home made trike | Good conrol of reflections. Perhaps getting in closer and changeing angle of view would enhance the feel of the shot? | 14 | |
13 | Out of the Blue | Composition - thinking about how the eye is lead though the image would be important here. Perhaps coming down from top left to bottom right and emphasing the change in texture? | 14 |