Set Projected Images – Junk
Judge: Matt Sillars
(Digital only 2022)
|Member No.||Image Title||Judge's Notes||Score||1st, 2nd, 3rd|
|37||On the scrap heap||A dynamic shot, central composition works. Edge darkening helps |
control the eye
|37||Old but not forgotten||Good use of effect to enhance the etherial qaulity. |
I like the central shape and the way the trees wrap round
|29||The lost shoes||Although a busy shot which needs more control of the eye, |
the ambiguty of the shoes works well.
|13||Unlocked||Nice close up following the rule of 3rds. Good rust but more could be |
made of the diagonal line of door handle to lead the eye.
|29||A collection of junk||Interesting play on the idea of scale. Clutter works well |
here although top line is a little light - although controlling eye is important.
|51||Van Graveyard||Good idea here to play with reflections. Dealing more with the top of the image |
will help control the movement of the eye
|62||The Junkie||Interesting shot - quite challenging. Good highlights and skin tones, |
but may need to rethink approach to get the background and the person working together.
|23||Barrow tree||Has great potential as it is a complex shot. Perhaps need cropping heavily|
to enhance the visual elements and work with the the way the colurs blend.
|62||Expensive Junk||Getting in closer may be useful here as less is often more . |
Perhaps an element of the car and a bit of background would work, Graffiti detail is intersting and could be capitalised on
|51||Spring-time||Good lines in this shot, but right hand edge needs more control - perhaps |
crop out? I think the left and central elements should be allowed to dominate.
|10||Old boats||Quite pictorial and I think would beneit from getting closer to show the lines |
of the boats more. Also to stop the occlusion of detail by overlapping boats
|16||Blooming Junk||Perhaps the angle of view coud be reconsidered to enance the line of |
colour and the line of rust?
|23||Air cleaner||Central compostion - may need to think about controllijg the eye. |
DOF may need to be more to isloate the key elements further.
|2||Artistic junk||Composition - needs to work with the line and shape to create a more |
dynamic shape. Also angle of view may be sueful to isolate front elements against the background.
|2||table decoration||Good spillage of material - but how to lead the eye through this complex |
image is a challenge. Finding the hook and then moving around to shift the elements about in relation to each other may creat a flow.
|10||my home made trike||Good conrol of reflections. Perhaps getting in closer and changeing |
angle of view would enhance the feel of the shot?
|13||Out of the Blue||Composition - thinking about how the eye is lead though the image would be|
important here. Perhaps coming down from top left to bottom right and emphasing the change in texture?