Set Projected Images – Junk
Judge: Matt Sillars
(Digital only 2022)
|1st, 2nd, 3rd
|On the scrap heap
|A dynamic shot, central composition works. Edge darkening helps
control the eye
|Old but not forgotten
|Good use of effect to enhance the etherial qaulity.
I like the central shape and the way the trees wrap round
|The lost shoes
|Although a busy shot which needs more control of the eye,
the ambiguty of the shoes works well.
|Nice close up following the rule of 3rds. Good rust but more could be
made of the diagonal line of door handle to lead the eye.
|A collection of junk
|Interesting play on the idea of scale. Clutter works well
here although top line is a little light - although controlling eye is important.
|Good idea here to play with reflections. Dealing more with the top of the image
will help control the movement of the eye
|Interesting shot - quite challenging. Good highlights and skin tones,
but may need to rethink approach to get the background and the person working together.
|Has great potential as it is a complex shot. Perhaps need cropping heavily
to enhance the visual elements and work with the the way the colurs blend.
|Getting in closer may be useful here as less is often more .
Perhaps an element of the car and a bit of background would work, Graffiti detail is intersting and could be capitalised on
|Good lines in this shot, but right hand edge needs more control - perhaps
crop out? I think the left and central elements should be allowed to dominate.
|Quite pictorial and I think would beneit from getting closer to show the lines
of the boats more. Also to stop the occlusion of detail by overlapping boats
|Perhaps the angle of view coud be reconsidered to enance the line of
colour and the line of rust?
|Central compostion - may need to think about controllijg the eye.
DOF may need to be more to isloate the key elements further.
|Composition - needs to work with the line and shape to create a more
dynamic shape. Also angle of view may be sueful to isolate front elements against the background.
|Good spillage of material - but how to lead the eye through this complex
image is a challenge. Finding the hook and then moving around to shift the elements about in relation to each other may creat a flow.
|my home made trike
|Good conrol of reflections. Perhaps getting in closer and changeing
angle of view would enhance the feel of the shot?
|Out of the Blue
|Composition - thinking about how the eye is lead though the image would be
important here. Perhaps coming down from top left to bottom right and emphasing the change in texture?