A similar image to the previous one where the main subject is the side mirror, on it’s
rusty mounting. Exposure and focus are well handled. the trees reflected in the windows
add an abstract quality to the image.
Image 3 is simple and tells a story, but many of the other images have too much
information to bring out the key theme of the portfolio. Images 4 and 5 have similar content,
whereas there may have been other parts of the tractor that might have provided a more
compelling subject. The lighting under which these images were taken is quite flat, and it
may have been worth revisiting this subject under different lighting conditions where the
colours and detail could have been brought out to emphasise specific areas and give the
viewer more defined focal points.
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A similar image to the previous one where the main subject is the side mirror, on it’s
rusty mounting. Exposure and focus are well handled. the trees reflected in the windows
add an abstract quality to the image.
Image 3 is simple and tells a story, but many of the other images have too much
information to bring out the key theme of the portfolio. Images 4 and 5 have similar content,
whereas there may have been other parts of the tractor that might have provided a more
compelling subject. The lighting under which these images were taken is quite flat, and it
may have been worth revisiting this subject under different lighting conditions where the
colours and detail could have been brought out to emphasise specific areas and give the
viewer more defined focal points.